你文章的内容很好,但是体裁太糟糕了.The matter in your essay is good but the style is deplorable.诗歌是很难写的艺术体裁.Poetry is a difficult art.用与你的题目相称的体裁写.Write in a style appropriate to your subject....
Back of the breakwater the dredger was working.在防波堤后面挖泥船正在工作.Steiner and Ilse were at the very end of the breakwater.施泰纳和艾尔丝呆在港口防波堤的顶端.The design of the breakwater was based on the recommendations of an engineering study...
3平方米的厚板倾斜放置着。The 3-metre-square slabs are on a tilt.一块6米见方的地毯面积是36平方米.A carpet six metres square has an area of 36 square metres.这间屋子是五米的三米, 合十五平方米.This room is five metres by three, or fifteen square metres....